Opinion please.

Hi all,

I took a stab at writing awhile back. I was just wondering f if you can give me feed back on how to improve.

Thanks,

Roger Mayer.

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What do you feel is wrong or weak in your writing? I don’t know that anyone here is an exceptional writer but from time to time we get to read an exceptional thought or well put opinion. However, as far as actual writing skills I think it’s a pretty even playing field here. No one’s ability stinks, yet no one shines with outstanding grace over anyone else.

I guess I would look into a writing class or tutorial type offering and just go for it! Most writer’s, or at least the truly talented ones, aren’t fond of their own writing ability and need to gauge it’s true worth based on results and reactive feedback from unbiased sources.

Just keep writing…………

Yea …..
what he said !!!!

I found it read well… good job !
Dave Hoggard